There's a bit of a trick in this poem. Actually there are 2 phrases hidden inside it. They're rather predictable, but anyway...I'm really proud of what I wrote for I've been struggling for a while to write something and I finally did. So I feel relieved. And happy. Extremely happy.
Such an amazing dark night it is to fall
Without any hope her body only needs to medicate,
Aimless, careless, faithless is her quest
Lonely, remotely, hopelessly are her dreams of an ideal.
Locked and hidden behind an echo
Oaths never cut her skin like a shiv,
Words reveal a fate beyond her strength to endure,
Time stays still while her wound turns into a scab,
Hollowly her heart beats like an abandoned wall.
Ember will always burn as long as she’s awake
Killing within, whilst shattering her tale.
Nodding obediently her body feels cold,
Insanity grasps intuition like a fallen anchor
Frustration has been long gone
Easing the pain with bare hands no longer demands blood.
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